Charlie
Overall thoughts:
- I think your take on women is very interesting
- I love that you're thinking about different generations of women and exploring different time periods throughout history
- I think a strong point in your concentration is your detail work - especially when it comes to your intricate flowers (I know those take a lot of time, but it's worth it!)
Suggestions:
- I'd like to see you continue with your unconventional frames and your flower cutouts
- It would be fun to see you use more unconventional materials
- A possible piece about women's suffrage or women's rights
- Further exploration of the different generations
- Further exploration of pattern and texture
- Continue to incorporate quotes
- Try to use maybe one more different medium - I'd personally like to see you try colored pencils
- I don't know if you are unhappy with the backgrounds of any of your pieces, but if you are, I'd suggest playing around with an editing app
I think you have a great concentration with visually interesting pieces, so I look forward to seeing what you create moving forward!
Josh
Overall thoughts:
- I like that you're taking a design stance
- I like that you're also incorporating photographs of your shoes
- I like that you incorporate fantasy into some pieces
- Your love for shoes is evident in your pieces and I like that about them
Suggestions:
- I really like the message and the design of your first piece, so I think it would be interesting if you did something like that again
- I like the way you are designing specific types of shoes with unique characteristics, so I'd like to see you continue that
- Along with that, I think you could benefit from adding actual pictures of fabric into the parts of your design to turn them into the physical design
- I'd like to see you incorporate more photographs of shoes you own or are drawn to into your digital work
- I thought your boot illustration was really fun, so I'd like to see you try another traditional piece
- Further exploration of the blueprint layout
- Maybe design shoes to fit different physical needs
- Continue to explore and incorporate texture
I think your concentration is very interesting, so I look forward to seeing more of it!
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